TWO LONELY SOULS

A Poem by Asra Hakak

soulmates are eternal!

Two lonely souls
were destined to be,
One soared out west
The other soared east!

Two lonely souls
Were on a quest for a heart,
Never stopping for water,
No light in the dark!

These two lonely souls
Were touched by distraction,
Losing each other
Provided no satisfaction!

When these two lonely souls
Sung out loudly for each other to hear it,
They merged into one
Most powerful spirit!

© 2015 Asra Hakak

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MelissaAndres

I agree with Coyote Poetry on this. It did have an ancient vibe to it. Very nice job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Coyote Poetry

I enjoyed the story in the poem. Had the feel of ancient tale. It is good when two wild heart find equal ground. Nice flow of thoughts led to very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 5, 2015
Last Updated on October 5, 2015

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Asra Hakak

India

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Thoughts are rare to come and pressures of life make less what one knows but notes help to remember and reflect.I write down my thoughts, thoughts that have no name given,I write down dreams and night.. more..