STANDING UNDER RAIN...

Death ends a life, not a relation .

Standing under rain,
I saw your body laid .
it had turned out blue,
and I had no clue,
of what was going on,
there in the lawn!
So I shouted loud,
but I was disallowed.
So I held in my pain,
and couldn't even complain
So I just stepped back
and stood beside the rack .
As they took you away,
you left me to defray .

The moment that you left, my heart was split in two.
One side was filled with memories and the other died with you.

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

The first part has this emotion that actually fills you with the terror the character might be feeling.
"take a walk down the memory lane with tears upon my cheek" I really like this line.
And the one you put in the title of the poem is very true, you should put it in the poem.

[Asra Hakak]

tysm Alondra
I'll surely consider your suggestion :)