Lies of Satan and Truth of God

let's embrace the right thing

SATAN tells you lies like
''It's ok''
And every thing is going to be alright
It's then when your body and soul fight
And it's all darkness and no light
Because you are the blind with sight
And the future is not looking so bright
You say you're going to stop but then you say there's no might,
Chances are slight
''BECAUSE YOU REJECT DAY AND EMBRACE NIGHT''


but your GOD knows
''It's not ok''
''It's not alright'
So he makes you know all this is not right
And this is an every day fight
It's then when you want to do what's right
Because you hate darkness and you need light
Now take the shades off and have a sight
Of the future that's looking so bright
You have stopped saying there's no might
And now the chances aren't so slight
BECAUSE NOW YOU EMBRACE DAY AND REJECT NIGHT .

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful words and thoughts.
"BECAUSE NOW YOU EMBRACE DAY AND REJECT NIGHT"
I agree. We decide our journey. Good or bad. Free-will of man. I tell people follow the good road. Know kindness, concern and love. A good life or decide the other. A dark life leave you alone with your greed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Left the reader with things to think about.
Coyote

[Asra Hakak]

tysvm for the read
COYOTE

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[RJ Humphries]

I really enjoyed this!
It was powerful and thought provoking and I was completely hooked from the beginning to end.
There was a smile on my face by the time it was over haha! I'm interested to read more of your work, well done! :)

- RJ Humphries

[Asra Hakak]

it was good to know you liked it
glad that you want to read more
tysm for reviewing!

[lightflower14]

hmmmn!i really love the poem.it is very great and the writer is so thoughtful.i also hope that we all understand the wars and obstacle we will face to embrace the day and reject the night.

[Asra Hakak]

glad to know you loved it
tysm for the read and the review!

[Sari Segale]

always the light!!! kindness, food for thought! thanks for sharing,Sari

[Asra Hakak]

tysm for the read and the review

[Lyingwithlions]

Very powerful and thought provoking words. What matters most is what we make of the day and night. I accept both for neither would exsist with out the other. I couldn't agree more with Coyote and Alondra T.N. We must all choose what is right and good for each of us. While at the same time not allowing the great deceiver do what it does best. Great piece!

[Asra Hakak]

well Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

anyways tysm for the read and the review

[Tomoe Tellez]

I hate it when people blame God for the mistakes of humankind and say that he doesn't exist because they have been hurt by evil people. They pray to God asking him for something he promised us that he wouldn't do, which is controlling other humans just like he does with the Angels, but they have no will and God gave us complete freedom to do whatever we wanted with our lives. You know Death used to be an angel and God took away his emotions and made him death. All those humans that complain about the pain that evil people have caused to them and they blame god, I am sure they wouldn't trade their lives for the job Death has. And I don't even blame the devil for the evil in this world, it is like you say here he tells us lies and we choose to follow them, we choose to listen to him for just like God has no control over us the devil doesn't either. We make the decisions in our life.
And you did a great job with this poem, you made think about all of this. Loved every line.

[Asra Hakak]

indeed what you said was true
but some people just can't understand

anyways tysvm for the appreciation ALONDRA
THESE KIND WORDS OF YOURS MEAN A LOT

[MelissaAndres]

Very well done! I am a Christian and many in this world either don't know who God is or just plain don't care. God is good all the time! And all the time, God is good!

[Asra Hakak]

yes indeed he is ^_^

[MelissaAndres]

Exactly, Asra!

[A writer]

Works the other way around for most people... Sadly. Hell, God seems to be dead.

[Asra Hakak]

he is there it's your conscience that's dead
you have let satan get over you and take control . he has made your soul your brain your heart his prisoner
make an effort push him away and then you will get to god is there he was there and he will be there
it's the satan that has blindfolded you that's why you ain't able to find god
just remove that fold from your eyes and find him by your side

[A writer]

Okay.......another lunatic... Bye.

[Asra Hakak]

probably you are a lunatic .... how can god be dead
.... only retards can say like that
read moreprobably you are a lunatic .... how can god be dead
.... only retards can say like that
bye
no hard feelings

[Khawaja Musadiq]

This is so so so nice. Do we have an option for reposting?

[Asra Hakak]

I won't thank you again

no idea .... if you find out anything such do inform :p

[Khawaja Musadiq]

I found a way! ;) :p

[Asra Hakak]

so tell me ......

[Khawaja Musadiq]

Check my profile. ;)