NOTHING LEFT

As she writes
Her specs turn damp
Even words don't help her now
Nothing is left
Just mere breathing with no life
Just mere heartbeats with a numb heart
Just mere tears with swollen eyes
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul

I wanna scream, but I won't
I wanna shout, no I won't
I wanna trust, yet it'll be broken again
I wanna love, how do I do?

No, I don't need you!
Or maybe I do
I just don't know

Leave me the way I am
Just leave
Go....! I said

Do you care anyway?
No I won't blame you.
No I don't want to bother you .

Don't waste your time on a worthless person like me .
Oh you left!
***SEE I KNEW YOU WON'T WASTE YOUR TIME***

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

This is a very heartfelt write.
Very emotional with intense feelings
of hopelessness.
Hanging on by a thin thread.
I feel the desperation in your poem.
It is so hard being in this dark place.
your soul is screaming out in
sheer agony.
I get a sense of a cry for help.
"Just mere breathing with no life
Just mere heartbeats with a numb heart
Just mere tears with swollen eyes
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul."
Your poem is well written and expressed.
Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

[Deep]

"Just mere body with damaged soul,
I wanna scream but i won't
I wanna shout , no i won't."
What or who makes you write this poem no one will know . But as a reader I wanna say that you reflect the pain through each and evrey words you use. Wonderful write.

[...]

Very nice and very beautiful. Nicely done.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

A very emotional piece... it hard to move on.. but sometimes thats the only option .... good one...

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find peace when life is not fair.
"Do you care anyway?
No I won't blame you.
No I don't want to bother you . "
Sometime we must stand our ground and be content with who we are. The poem told a story of sadness and disappointment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

This one is very emotional and gripping. Great job.

[Tomoe Tellez]

This is a very emotional poem and I really liked this part:
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul
Great write!

[Asra Hakak]

tysm Alondra!

[SecludedFantasy]

I really feel the sadness... and ohhhh that feeling is rampant nowadays.. keep it up :)

[Asra Hakak]

thanks for reviewing this

[SecludedFantasy]

No problem... And your welcome

[Miss Sharon]

There is a very dark sadness and introspective self-loathing in this post. You write with deep emotion. ~Sharon

[Asra Hakak]

tysm for the read and the review

[Miss Sharon]

You are very welcome...my pleasure! ~Sharon

[Khawaja Musadiq]

This is a good piece, infact lovely. ♥
Bless up. :)

[Asra Hakak]

means a lot... tysm :)

[Khawaja Musadiq]

Anytime. :)