NOTHING LEFT

NOTHING LEFT

A Poem by Asra Hakak

As she writes
Her specs turn damp
Even words don't help her now
Nothing is left
Just mere breathing with no life
Just mere heartbeats with a numb heart
Just mere tears with swollen eyes
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul

I wanna scream, but I won't
I wanna shout, no I won't
I wanna trust, yet it'll be broken again
I wanna love, how do I do?

No, I don't need you!
Or maybe I do
I just don't know

Leave me the way I am
Just leave
Go....! I said

Do you care anyway?
No I won't blame you.
No I don't want to bother you .

Don't waste your time on a worthless person like me .
Oh you left!
***SEE I KNEW YOU WON'T WASTE YOUR TIME***

© 2015 Asra Hakak


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This is a very heartfelt write.
Very emotional with intense feelings
of hopelessness.
Hanging on by a thin thread.
I feel the desperation in your poem.
It is so hard being in this dark place.
your soul is screaming out in
sheer agony.
I get a sense of a cry for help.
"Just mere breathing with no life
Just mere heartbeats with a numb heart
Just mere tears with swollen eyes
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul."
Your poem is well written and expressed.
Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.


Posted 8 Years Ago


"Just mere body with damaged soul,
I wanna scream but i won't
I wanna shout , no i won't."
What or who makes you write this poem no one will know . But as a reader I wanna say that you reflect the pain through each and evrey words you use. Wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Very nice and very beautiful. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very emotional piece... it hard to move on.. but sometimes thats the only option .... good one...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hard to find peace when life is not fair.
"Do you care anyway?
No I won't blame you.
No I don't want to bother you . "
Sometime we must stand our ground and be content with who we are. The poem told a story of sadness and disappointment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


This one is very emotional and gripping. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very emotional poem and I really liked this part:
Just mere pulses with bleeding veins
Just mere body with damaged soul
Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

9 Years Ago

tysm Alondra!
I really feel the sadness... and ohhhh that feeling is rampant nowadays.. keep it up :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

9 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing this
SecludedFantasy

9 Years Ago

No problem... And your welcome
There is a very dark sadness and introspective self-loathing in this post. You write with deep emotion. ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

9 Years Ago

tysm for the read and the review
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome...my pleasure! ~Sharon
This is a good piece, infact lovely. ♥
Bless up. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

9 Years Ago

means a lot... tysm :)
Khawaja Musadiq

9 Years Ago

Anytime. :)

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Added on September 2, 2015
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Asra Hakak
Asra Hakak

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