Memories to keep smiling!

I Love my family! This 1 goes out to my Grand Pa :)

Memories to keep smiling!

 

The blue sky suddenly turned gray,

Happiness suddenly refused to stay,

In peace you would lay,

Is all that we pray.

 

Dear grandpa, we miss u a lot,

Will remember d lessons you had taught,

D sweets and gifts you had brought,

And the Infinite Happiness from you we got!

 

You are so far yet so near,

we can still feel you here,

I know you tell us when we drop a tear,

Not to be sad but only cheer.

 

For all your boundless love and care,

Beautiful moments together we shared,

We send you our wishes and a promise to keep,

We will smile with your memories & never weep!

 

Love you Grandpa for keeping us smiling all the way!

Author's Note

Please leave your comments and suggestions. Thank you!

Reviews

[Ashwini S.]

thanks Mimi...wil consider ur suggestions!

[Mimi Evans]

This is really sweet :)
For the last stanza, you may want to make all 4 lines rhyme at the end like you did with all the other stanzas. Also, I recommend taking out the text language e.g. 'we miss u a lot' and 'remember d lessons'. The poem will just look more well put-together that way.