Rubble

I feel heavy

I feel weak

I feel hopeless

I feel meek

And you 

Just bring me down

Bring me down to rubble on the ground

And you

How do you feel now

Do you feel so accomplished and proud

Now I feel lonesome 

I feel weak

I feel hopeless 

I can't speak

You

Just bring me down

Bring me down to rubble on the ground

You

Step all over me

Prancing so happily

As if I'm your masterpiece

Cause you

Brought me down

To this silenced rubble on the ground

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work Ashley.... great expressions of emotion in this poem. You provide beautiful imagery to your pain and the disappointment of being hurt by this person. Stay strong my friend :)

[ashleymarie]

Thanks so much!