The Incredible Distractions

The Incredible Distractions

A Poem by ashleymarie
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Think about this world and the people we surround ourselves with.

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There goes two birds
And a third
I am a modern version of Eleanor Rigby
Who will really remember me?
I feel useless
F*****g hopeless
If it's this bad now
The where am I going and how?
I'm kneeling down
Beaten down
Living in her shadow
Is there something you all can foreshadow?
Can you now predict the future?
No you can't even grasp the concept of torture
You have no f*****g idea
Why don't you go and post that s**t on social media
If anybody actually cared about another's emotions
It would be proved in a motion
But no, we are all filled with unnecessary distractions
God damn it, speak with actions
Not words!
Oh, there goes those two birds
And the lost third

© 2015 ashleymarie


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Strong write, really strong write.
I agree with you, We need to make actions, but we do need some words to make the actions come.
Powerful writing, it is really good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ashleymarie

9 Years Ago

No the corny things are the ones that are the most truthful!
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Damn right on that one!
ashleymarie

9 Years Ago

Hahah. Yeah!

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Added on February 21, 2015
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ashleymarie
ashleymarie

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I love poetry and photography! I'm insecure, I have my demons. But I love to share my feelings with people who don't know me. I'm 15 and I live in Virginia...I love and hate my life. more..

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