Empty.

I’m an empty bottle
Floating out at sea.
I have no vital message
That lies within me.

 

Finding land seems impossible,
No one is searching for me.
But I never would have thought
I’d be quite this lost at sea.

 

But I will keep on floating
Until I find some land.
letting waves guide me
To discover who I really am.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[teardrop]

beautiful write

[Anna]

I love the simplicity of this poem!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written. Positive and optimistic, despite the unknown.

[InsanityWriter]

Very good. :) Excellent imagery!! ^_^

100/100

[Cheyenne Delay]

I love it