abuse

if i could pick my family
everyone knows i would
my life is hectic
but id change that if i could
my brother hurts me physiclly
he says that i know he should
he called me worthless today
he doesnt understand. im so misunderstood
he choked till i hit the pavement
my head is bleeding slightly
he treats me like im inslavement
he hits me in the back nightly
no matter what i do
even if i speak politley
he says hes just joking
he knows i wont take him lightly

Author's Note

ignore grammer, let me know what you think please (:

Reviews

[clisa]

This is very sad if it is true. The grammar is really driving me nuts so please try and fix it as well as the spelling. Think about what your poem is saying - is it a cry for help? Is it a simple description? Poetry, well writing in general is a brave act. Be braver and make something that makes this about something positive. Ask for help, leave, fight back - anything other than - I'm stuck, I'm helpless, no on understands me. Write a second poem that makes this better, that begins to think of solutions.