Prisoner

Prisoner

 

The walls that I see are too tall to climb.

A clock in the distance, frozen in time.

Never ending silence from deep inside.

I must be a prisoner of my own mind.

 

Am I strong enough to break this bind?

As I pull myself up slowly from the cold hard floor.

I stare in amazement at the key in the door.

Realizing  I am a prisoner of my mind no more.

Reviews

[nostal]

Beautiful!
Loved the ryhem and the flow.
Great write.

[deeps]

I enjoyed this write. Short and to the point, very well written.

[Saturn's Lover]

Short and sweet. To the point. I liked it. Happy ending was nice.

[Theresa]

I love it. Another amazing poem. I like how it starts off a bit negative and ends on a positive note. I think this is a poem that so many people can relate to. I know I can. Just Awesome.