Unknown

The unknown that life brings us

Truly fascinates me dear

Every corner that I turn

Another unknown waiting patiently to appear

 

I know God works

In such a mysterious way

But I never would have imagined

My unknown would be today

Author's Note

First poem

Reviews

[Saturn's Lover]

Good story, great flow, nice rhyme scheme. The end made me smile. Great job!

[cest la vie]

Zang!!

First poem, you did very good.
Just let that ceativity fly.This is heartfelt and very nice.
Lynne

[Theresa]

For your first poem this is really good. It flows, it has meaning and it is written very well. Keep going with it, if this is your first I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Seriously awesome job.