Thoughts of Random Moments

Ode for Rain - Hurt - Resurrection - Pile Up.

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Ode for Rain

“Headlights of the cars glimmer the street,

And the raindrops look like million butterflies

Flickering their wings together; they rise and they die”

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Hurt

“And they laugh on your pain,

I wonder would they cry on your death”

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Resurrection

“Souvenir the sweet memories of those who are lost behind,

Move on with a brave heart; loving everyone who is left around”

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Pile Up

“There is a downpour of thoughts,

And my mind is being flooded by the words”

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Author's Note

Some fading thoughts in my diary :)

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

This is genius!
To be able to comprehend life, the subtle meaning of it! The wisdom to know the truth about life, things and everything. You could have been gifted with acute sense of comprehension not just words but the meaning of life itself!

I got to learn a lot of wisdom from you
Keep on writing please

[dovetailer]

Lovely words...I would lose the ellipses...I find they are distracting...I use them a little...but you want your words to rule the page...
Wonderful sentiments...

[Brad]

yes, i am an avid scribbler of random thoughts myself and have often asked some of these perplexing quandaries...i love the second one the best

[Immortal1967]

great job...my favorite part was hurt...2 sentences, profound impact.

[Michael of Gilead]

I really liked "pile up" so often i get so many thoughts and how they relate and then they drain away...lol