She?!

About her.

She is a bird without nest
She is wind with changing direction
She is blue ocean
She is red fire
She is a whimsical charmer

She hurts cruel

She is a lover
She is a butcher
She looks so warm yet
She feels so cold
She is a princess
She is a w***e

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

Can't live with em, can't live without em.

[Ruth]

Oooohhhh...nice! The enthrall before the slaughter! Excellent! xx

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you etch her beautifully well~ each of us are such dualities~

[SpokenWord]

There is no blue print for women, I gave up years ago trying to find logic or understand them, now I just go with the flow. Friend today, Foe tomorror, lover next week and so on. I like the way you captured the many sides to her.

[A.Lee]

Very nice. Everything and nothing, good and bad. Odd how people can be that way. Good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Woman keep a man wondering. I have been marry for 20 years and still know little about woman. I like the poem. Create a good story with a very good ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ForTheWorld]

irony..it's nice, i love the poem especially the line "She hurts cruel"...i love it... =D

[.]

she's seems to be your everything and your nothing..an interesting oxymoron..

[Penulis Kecil]

You've made an interesting use of contrast in this one but I love your opener best. "She is a bird without nest" is definitely my favourite line in this one.

[Brad]

yes, i believe i've dated her once upon a time