You

To Jake. A friend who changed my life.

Strong and kind

A sense of right
My oh my
You're one of a kind
Dancing away
The destruction, the pain
All of the evil this world contains
A star at it's brightest
Lighting the night sky
For others to be free
A smile like no other
A voice that's broken free
Heard through the crowd
For you are you
Thoughts and all
One of a kind
A leader
A shooting star
A change maker
A voice of guidance
To oh so many
So happy I am
To call you my friend
For you are you
One of a kind
An imperfect perfection

Reviews

[Carbon Muse]

Singing the beauty of their qualities, what better way is there to honor a friend such as that...

What I loved the most ... is the acknowledgement at the end ...

"An imperfect perfection"

accepting that they are not perfect ... it gives a sense that you don't mind their flaws, their imperfections. So much so that you don't mention them at all. That says a lot.

I loved the way you described them...

Thank you for sharing!

[Ashley Lytle]

Thank you! ☺️

[zunie frost]

very nice ................ love this !!!!! thanks for sharing it !!!!!

[Ashley Lytle]

Thanks! ☺️

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!

[Neythan Cardoso]

This just rocks and sways in your head when I read it. It resonates within me just how I feel about some of my friends, Keep up the good work

[Ashley Lytle]

Thank you so much!

[Neythan Cardoso]

No problem!

[Kathryn Desautels]

This is really good! I like the rhythm and
Dancing away
The destruction, the pain
All of the evil this world contains
is probably my favorite part. Its described beautifully. Good job! I hope you deside to write more like this in the future!

[Ashley Lytle]

Thank you ☺️