Cranes

A haiku I wrote one day in Japanese class.

Cranes soaring swiftly

Over the snow-capped mountains

Not stopping to rest

Reviews

[N3v3r_2_L@t3]

Lol this is the shortest peice I have ever read. I thought i read a short peice the other day...but it was also good. Its good how some people such as yourself, can fit such meaning into such a short piece of literature. Congradulations to that. I don't know how a haiku works, but I'm sure you did a great job on it. It seems as though you have some potential to write longer peices, if you do, let me know, I would love to read them. Good job=]Welcome to writers cafe

[Larissa G.]

This I will safely say is a very beautiful haiku. Way to go, girl. :)

[Mokey]

Great visuals, great alliteration, great haiku! :) I liked happening upon this random glimpse of something beautiful in nature. That's the joy of haikus.

[Poeticpiers]

excellent effort. I could visualise easily