let me welcome you

Be free she whispered

I ran to the edge running

slipping I fell

down into a deep darkened hell

 

I see a light dimly

taunting me

teasing me

begging me to come to it

 

I make my way but it just keeps getting further

the tunnel is never ending

playing its mind game

wanting me to loose

proving to me I should loose

 

but I am stronger,

stronger than this hell

stronger than the dimly light

 

Reviews

[Maya]

The imagery is great! One of the best poems I have read recently.

[D S Rollins]

I can fully picture the light and not being to get to it-- I love when I read writing and I can see it like a little scene in my mind. Great work :)