waves

Hold your breath
Dive in deep
Here it comes the cold break of water against your skin
Released

Close your eyes
Don't stop now
Reach the surface and scream
Every noise heard above the surface
Agony

Hold your breath
Shallow now
Relax your muscles
Realize the waves pulling into the current
Reality

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

All real nice moments of gratified love-nights you've gently cracked on insightful words. The waves of love're always the ones which drive even the whole life to nowhere but to the verge of romance & ecstasy where only happiness awaits for love-hearts. Nice imagery!

[AshlynnA]

Didn't think anyone would see the underlying purpose of the poem. Thank you!

[Misery]

A nice inspiration, dear poet.