l.o.v.e.

Emotions run high.

It’s that fairytale kind of love

The kind that makes you want to cry after a kiss

The moment where you miss them as soon as they leave the room

It’s that kind that you read about in books

He lifts me up

He believes in me as much as I believe in him

There is a fear of him leaving or putting on a show 

I hope he isn't just playing with my emotions like a child’s toy

I pray that this is a reality instead of a fantasy land 

I care deeply about him

I want to please in every way possible

I am being honest and true to him and myself

My heart feels complete

My emotions are on my sleeve 

Author's Note

just what i felt like today. it's just been an emotional kind of day.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Totally Compatible Disk of love! One side`s love! And the other one`s full of emotions! That`s all what love brings to the hearts, Ashlynn.

[AshlynnA]

Thanks! My favorite quote is when i write i just sit down and bleed,Ernest Hemingway. That is what i did here.

[Wórdsmíth]

Welcome! And I think, you did a great job. Are you a fan of "Hemingway"? (If may I ask)

[AshlynnA]

oh yes a big one. I'm also drawn to edgar allen poe. i like rhythm in writing and i always say if i can hear the words then it's a good write.

[Wórdsmíth]

Robert frost, edgar poe and emily dicknson`re the great ones as far as I know .. but it`s always been my passion to read great ancient writers poetry and learn from different kinds of patterns in which they write .. because it helps writers to learn more about cultures as well as the new trends.. Isn`t it? So, can you suggest me some top-listed poetry`s oh "Hemingway?" I`d like to read his work either.

[AshlynnA]

Robert Frost's Stopped by the woods on a snowy evening is my favorite from him. As far as Hemingway concerned i like his compile of short stories in Men without women.

[Wórdsmíth]

Your choice`s excellent! Me too love that poem, that poem speaks itself to the world.. to the corners of the hearts taking us all away to the breath of "evenings." And I think, "The Vantage Point" is not that bad.. I like this one too, here, if you do read, can find the mixture of many elements and that`s all what make me more aware of the world with his worlds. The rhyming pattern he`s used in this poem`s very unique and creative. I like that! And Oh, okay.. well, I think, "google" can open the pages of "Hemingway" so, I`d go with "google" .. anyway, thanks for your help. you`ve been very helpful to me and i`d try to take a look at that poem either you`ve mentioned me .. ;)