Without

Waiting on words to be spoken 

Waiting for life to start

Together with you I hold the puzzle pieces

Together We can conquer the world

Waiting to feel life inside me

Waiting to hear that voice

Together with you sweet baby

Together We hold the  world

Waiting for your last breath to be taken

Waiting for the silence to set in

Without I’m uncertain

Without there is no end

Reviews

[james miles]

this is such a deep beautiful piece:)

[MAC]

I am a complete sucker for love poems and this is a absolutely a well written love poem. bravo!!

[Sam Ryann]

Amazing poem, I absolutely loved it. I'm not sure if you meant to spell "conquer" rather than "concur" though, no worries. The way you started every two lines with the same word is very interesting, I like it.

[AshlynnA]

oh goodness,i didn't even realize my grammor. I just write and post. Thank you!

[Sam Ryann]

No worries, it's not a problem. I loved reading it.

[lee von cleef]

first love, a little shy, a little quick , but the memory , oh a life time!