Memory

At some point this will stop.

The busyness of feet 

Rushing of words left unsaid.

At some point we will realize 

How that kiss was more than just soft

The importance of your touch

At some point I will be found

In your arms, on your bed 

Beneath you body you will feed me 

With love and intimacy and truth

But, at some point that will stop too.

It will end with a breathless sigh

Become a memory in time

At some point 

I will no longer be 

As beautiful

As bright 

As you once seen me. 

Oh memory how you fail me 

How you play on my mind

At some point it has to stop.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Memories ~~ the old memories always make us fail ~~ we`re all fruitless holding the time right in the palm of our hands cus .. it`s always in our hands.. isn`t it? But the old time overlaps the new ones when we go hide behind the dark nights sitting alone in a corner of a room ~~ getting lost in past ~~ thinking of old time ~~ having it back in present ~~ but it never comes because life never gives another chance so, how can the time? No way ~~ What a beautiful message you convey here indirectly that we all gotta walk with the time ~~ All verses are well penned with each n every drop pf of your moisten emotions ~~ with fragile heart. Great job!!

[AshlynnA]

I like to write in raw honest emotion. Your right about the time. I didn't think it would be conveyed. Memories are just a part of our future as they are in our past. Thanks!

[Stephen]

My pleasure! Your this statement " Memories are just a part of our future as they are in our past" can fired up the heart of millions of trillions of writers indeed .. I`d like to know some more on THIS STATEMENT so, if you don`t get bother by me ... would you love to shed some pieces of lights over this statement ... i`d be honored if I could know some of your MORE point of views ~~ from your perspectives ~~~

[AshlynnA]

At the point of making a memory it becomes our past. So when we start to recreate that perfect kiss or that way he touched me it becoming a future desire that is a never ending chase of something that can never become reality.

[Addy]

I like how you change the number of lines in a stanza. It sounds really good. Heartfelt.

[Daydreamer]

No,no! Despite the agony and sheer overwhelmedness (:P)
you're lucky if your memory remains ;)
Distinct portray.

[A. Amos]

thought provoking and simply amazing write, I like the honesty in your write...Bravo

[AshlynnA]

honest is how i write,you just sit down and bleed Ernest Hemingway

[A. Amos]

Keep writing you are really good...

[AshlynnA]

reviews are welcomed!everyone has an opinion let me read yours.