Looking

This is the first thing i've written in years, i guess it's a little darker than i expected.

As I look into her eyes there is adventure, there is a softness to be held. 

As I look into her  eyes I see newness, grace.

As I look into her eyes I can’t help but get lost in the sea of blue.

As I look into her eyes I see hurt, I see mistakes made

As I look into her eyes I see regrets of what was never finished

As I look into her eyes I can’t help but rescue her during the storm

As I look into her eyes there is sweetness, there is security in all things right.

As I look into her eyes I see age and worry and fear 

As I look into her eyes I can’t help but mourn and cry

AS I look into the sky I am reminded of her eyes

Her eyes of blue that covers me

As I look into the sky I see all things pure and good

Things made up holiness and spirituality 

As I look into the sky I can’t help but feel close to her and her beauty.

Reviews

[Stephen]

To be honest, This write makes me stunned indeed, now no matter what. Your "As I look into ... " Is all what touched my heart ~~ an every beat of it ~~ walking over the strips of love ~~ blowing away with the coldness of your Words ~~ to the *Sigh* ~~ Peace ~~ Lovely. It`s an excellent write, Ashley. You`ve got a talent of talent ~~ a glory of glory to bleed ~~ bleed in words ~~ flow with your beautiful creative mind`s imaginative thoughts ~~ along the side of cold bridges ~~ reaching to the next shore ~~ where the success`s been awaiting for ya, honey ... since a long. I`m pleased to read your stuffs. I`ve been on your profile so, yeah ... All the best for your writing!

[AshlynnA]

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