Boys Make Girls Write Bad Poetry

Well I don't know how often this happens for you,                                                                                                                      

but for me I simply can't afford to pass it.

And please before you wipe your nose with me,        

take notice. I'm still good for a lot more then that.

Everything you could ever want is right here at your feet.           

Everything you could ever need is chasing you arms waving.

And I don't know how often this happens for you,                                 

but I just cannot afford to pass it.

Theres something in me that see something in you                               

that wouldn't be bad to roll over to in the morning.

And theres something in you that does something to me

that restricts my breathing.                 

So please, I don't know how often this happens for you,                                                                                                    

but I simply cannot afford to pass it.                                    

 

Reviews

[revolution9]

I looooveeeee this poem. Mostly because you convey the feelings I have at this moment in the world of love and relationships. The feelings you are expressing here are complex and you pull it off with such clarity that it very admirable. I also like the voice of this poem -- it's a unique one and it peeked my interest as I read it . I also love the title. Wonderful read!

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a very clever poem which echos the
cute personality of the writer.

Very well done, it demonstrates a wonderful talent,
great, good humor and imagination.

Hope to see more of this.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Chris1189]

Hehe, I like the humor in the title.

Excellent poem, your writing is great. You've got a lot of talent.