the fallen leaf

It is a high time now that we rise above our greed and pay attention to the warnings given by nature. we need to treasure and take care of it. here is a conversation between a person and a tree.

There is this tree

Old, gloomy and it’s branches set free

In middle of the street

While I was standing and admiring it,

He waved his hand to me

And said,” glee! At last someone

Who notices me”

I saw he was miserable

I asked out of curiosity

“ what happened?”

He replied

“ oh ! to me?! Nothing”

“Why are you depressed?”

“Actually I’m suppressed”

“Who did that to you?”

“Think yourself

The place where you reside

Is the graveyard

Where my family died”

“Sorry! I did not know”

“It is not pity

That you should show”

“Tell me! How can I help?”

“Introspect yourself

Am I the one in need?”

I reflected for few seconds

And said,

“You are right indeed”

Now how do you feel?”

“I think we are in a dire need”

“Need of what my dear?”

“Some brains I guess”

“But you’ve got one right”

“Then how did we end up like this”

“Just lack of few things”

What are those”

“Be aware!

Use resources properly

Control your greed

And you will definitely succeed”

 

“Thank you ugh…”

It suddenly turned back normal

Fell from the above

The prettiest leaf

And at least this time

With a lesson I did leave……

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is a clever yet slow boiling pan and so interesting to read. Could have gone another way, yet ends where it should: protect Nature and everything it means with mind and heart in equal quantities. You have only to look at a plant, shrub or tree to know it's sad, wanting.. just as can see the same wretchedness in a human being. You've captured and expressed the need by willingly sharing your concern with your readers. Brava, Aradhana!

[Just Kim]

This is so very good, I really enjoyed this write

[Aradhana]

thank u for going through this.. pleased to read ur views :)

[Karoline Lesande]

What an important message. Nice writing :)

[Aradhana]

thank you :)

[light and ashes]

I think this is really great. I like the play of words....a slightly whimsical write with a serious lesson for mankind. Yes, we must learn to control our greed. This is really good work!

[Aradhana]

thank you so much for your charming words :)

[light and ashes]

You are welcome! If only more people thought like this!

[Aradhana]

Hmm true ! Sad truth which knowingly I don't want to believe on💔

[Dave Brown]

I take this seriously because you could call me a tree hugger
We live in a developing area, trees down, buildings up, and the environment doesn't benefit!
Could you give that big fella a hug for me, we need more of both of you around

[Aradhana]

Sure I will do that from your side.. I always do to everyone I pass by ! I m a tree hugger myself ;) thank you for your words....

[Dave Brown]

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[Miss Sharon]

A beautiful write with a very timely and important message for us all! ~Sharon

[Aradhana]

Thanks a lot for your kind review 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Some really great lines in this poem which also has a strong message. I am a tree lover too. You can learn so much from them. Enjoyed this read immensely. Thank you.

Chris

[Aradhana]

it is my pleasure u liked this one ..... Thank u soo much for going through this...

[Chris Shaw]

The pleasure is all mine. I am liking your writing :)

[Papaya]

Such a brilliant message in this with easy flowing dialogue.

Loved these lines:
“Think yourself
The place where you reside
Is the graveyard
Where my family died”

They really resonated.
This could be an educational story for youngsters.

[Aradhana]

I am really moved by your words
. Thank you so much.... I am glad u liked my work :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Human beings are also part of Nature.
That we should be good stewards goes without saying.
Your saying of it, however, is quite charming

[Aradhana]

thank you for your words...glad u went through this one..again thanks a lot!

[AJNJ]

A poem with a great message. I like the conversational tone. I really appreciate the thoughts that went into this work. Trees are vital and I respect them. Nice poem!

[Aradhana]

thanks for your precious words...... :)