To the girl I don't know

A Jordan S original. A girl I drempt of, I got every part of her but her face remain hidden.

Your beauty is as boundless as the sea

Your hair mimics the golden fields of wheat

Surly no goddess can match your beauty

With your skin like snow that falls in perfect sheets

Eyes brown like the glorious mother earth

Your voice is a perfect symphony

You greatly understate your worth

Many wish to pronounce there love on bended knee

You do not seem to grasp your astounding gifts

Many wish to say “she is all mine”

But when you are near my soul seems to lift

I say that you are truly divine

But it can wait; I must ask something of thee

Would you do me the honor of making you and I we?

Reviews

[Taji Herbert]

very touching i am intrigued at how the unknown enticed you

[wafa]

I really appreciate the idea of writing a dedication to someone you never met you don't know the face, since yesterday i read a nice poem having that meaning " If i didn't exist would you look for me", am sorry i couldn't find its placement, so for me your poem is like an answer for the other poem...

To be honest, i wished you could say more about that girl you don't know since you seem you know her well^_^
Great inspiring work...i like it!!!