Unlovable

Unlovable

A Poem by Vava
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Quiet at a corner daydreaming
Even the howling wind seems to of ceased
Waiting
The telephone has stopped its ringing
Quietly in this corner feeling lost
The clock doesn't know how stop

Anticipating something
I lay suddenly awake
Your warmth transparent besides me
like something to rely on
Lingering to love or not to

Back and forth I rock myself

I guess you probably already know that this isn't love
I think that I'm just another replacement
You've told be that you're not lovable
I think you understand that this isn't love
But I guess you just forgotten what love is

Although I'm lovable
I'm still not loved enough

© 2010 Vava


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I really liked this.
There was emotion here with something beautiful and patient in it, but still had a sting of hurt.. like a love struck bee, that was an odd metaphor.. pay no mind to that. Anyways. I enjoyed this :)
Great write ^-^
-Cathrine

Posted 14 Years Ago



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