My paper heart

My paper heart

A Poem by Ender
"

I will never be the same, just as a torn paper heart.

"
My paper heart; fragile as it may
be and replaceable, yet is one of a million
red confessions sent on valentine's day.
paper is thou paper, torn to be never the
same like before: neither by a gluing fix or 
taping reconciliation can mend
what was a pure childhood craft made with 
all passionate intent. 
So be as it may, I will never be the same:
torn like a paper heart, that had all my crimson
red confessions with glittering impressions-
that was as a childhood's valentine craft. 
 

© 2011 Ender


Author's Note

Ender
*sigh* I can write of love, but never have it.

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I actually kind of like the repetition after "So be as it may, I will never be the same" because it reiterates the feeling within, giving the whole piece a lyrical quality.
My favorite lines: "neither by a gluing fix or
taping reconciliation can mend
what was a pure childhood craft made with
all passionate intent. "
I view this poem as a heart's cry... but maybe your heart isn't so fragile as you may think.. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I actually kind of like the repetition after "So be as it may, I will never be the same" because it reiterates the feeling within, giving the whole piece a lyrical quality.
My favorite lines: "neither by a gluing fix or
taping reconciliation can mend
what was a pure childhood craft made with
all passionate intent. "
I view this poem as a heart's cry... but maybe your heart isn't so fragile as you may think.. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My paper heart;
fragile as it may be and replaceable,
yet is one of a million
red confessions sent on valentine's day.
Paper is still paper, torn
never to be the same as before:
neither glue can fix nor
taping reconciliation mend
what was a pure childhood craft
made with all passionate intent.
So be as it may, I will never be the same:
torn like a paper heart, that had all my crimson
red confessions with glittering impressions-
that was as a childhood's valentine craft.

Playing with words sometimes. It is my opinion that the first section is strong enough that you don't really need anything after so be as it may . . . but you know your on heart best

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I really love the whole concept of this poem and the way you worded it was brilliant. Amazing job on this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOVE THE CONCEPT OF THIS AND THE WAY YOU WORD IT. GREAT WORK

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Ender

Pittsburgh, PA



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