not all secrets are of gold

not all secrets are of gold

A Poem by Ender
"

so tempting is a secret.

"
not all secrets are made of gold, 
yet they're tempting?
Twas a good secret, and lest it be spread
and sent through out the cosmos-
the vastness of cold vapid 
depth could then choked all of it's existence.
so again I say: not all secrets are of gold,
but they shimmer with the best quality
known to humanity- lacking the truth 
from another person, is just like a treasure
locked away from vast vapid deafening depth.

© 2011 Ender


Author's Note

Ender
a sudden burst of inspiration. a friend of mine was keeping something that made him do a certain thing. he wouldn't tell me.... it made me so irritated but a little apathetic of why I wanted to know such a secret. secrets then are things not of gold, but far more worthy to a title grand" a treasure to covet after and be not content to hold back once had.

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That was a wonderful poem..:) words so nicely composed and put together... and true! some secrets are best kept hidden.. somethings are not meant to be shared.. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

some secrets are gold

others may be baser mettle

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What was your inspiration?? And this is a marvelous poem. At first i didnt understand it but as i cant reading I was like oh... thats kinda true. So great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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