No More (Song with Video)

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.

You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.

You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say

*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.

I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...

(Repeat Chorus)

Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...

But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

Author's Note

What do you think of the song? And does anybody know the guitar chords of this? I'd really like this to have a background music.

One more thing, I apologize for the video. Obviously, there was a mistake while I was filming it. Haha. Thank you.

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

What a way to start the day! Lyrically, with Blue singing a love poem a`capella. There is something innocent and yet endearing about the way that you've chosen to present this piece. From a film making perspective (of which I know very little) I think it has a personal, rustic charm that draws the viewer into the composition as a whole. It has je ne sais quoi - perhaps an appeal that crosses artistic and cultural boundaries in a way that is pleasing to a broad audience. I know you're hearing the music in your head and I too strove to hear the accompaniment and to feel the rhythm of your breath and expression as you vocalized the lyrics. Also there was the pausing - for you it was a moment of faulty recall - but in a way, it was also a dramatic interpretation of the singer, reflecting upon what has just been said. A serendipitous malfunction in my opinion as it did not detract but rather enhanced the overall performance. Even the slight blush of color was poetic and apropos to the effort. All in all I think it's marvellous and it leaves me wanting to get some musicians, book some studio time and archive you working on the finished product.

100 crowing roosters

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

What a detailed and constructive review, Tam. Thank you. :)

Anyway, are you a musician? You seem to know much about this stuff. :)

[Tam Warink]

I've have some knowledge/experience as a composer/performer. Do you have the knowledge/skill to jot down the melody in standard sheet music notation? That would be very useful should ever desire a collaboration with other artists.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Sorry, Tam. I honestly have no idea about that "standard sheet notation". That's why I posted this video 'cause I am hoping someone can help me with that.

Anyway, being a composer or performer is impressive! :) I applaud you.

[Tam Warink]

Ah, well then.. perhaps I can pluck it from your video and transcribe it for you. I'll let you know if I'm successful at that. I assume you would be available for consultation/clarification. Right? It might take a while. Spare time and all that. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow. REALLY? that's...WOW. Thank you, thank you. Sure, I will make myself available for that. Best wishes, Tam. Good luck with that. :)

[Avinash]

That Rooster is cheering you up in the background and so are we :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I guess so, too. :) The rooster would like to express it's sincere "thank you". :)

[s y e]

This is beautiful and your voice MY GOODNESS! Amazing as ever, this has to be the best song I've read on this site! Just... wow!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Noodlehead, thanks a lot! :)

[Angel]

WOW!
You are a very beautiful girl...of course, we knew that already.
And you are an incredibly talented writer. We knew that, too.
And...you have an amazingly beautiful voice! Girl, you are totally awesome!!
Great lyrics, great music, fantastic song...
Kinda hard on the neck, sitting with my head tilted over...but worth it!

The rooster in the background made me smile...is he auditioning for you?
He could be your back up singer...."Blue and the Bird"...

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahaha. You had me laughing, Angel... :) The rooster, too, would like to thank you for your beautiful words. You rock. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You can sing. I like hearing your voice and the song. A beautiful song and remember singing without music and support is very hard. You did very well. Thank you for the amazing video and the poetry.
Coyote

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Coyote. Your reviews do not disappoint. :)

[Eddie Davis]

Wow, a video! My goodness, that takes it to a full new level. First, you know I like the song, but for Heaven's sake, you have an incredible voice! Even with the rooster accompanying you, it sounded great, even acapella.

You are an extremely pretty young lady too, it would seem you have it all together, Blue. You're talented, beautiful and with a lovely voice.

Don't be afraid to express yourself more, you certainly have what it takes and I think you certainly could go far.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I posted the lyrics in this site months ago and some reviewers mentioned that they'd like to hear this with music so...here's the video. :) Thank you, Eddie. :)

[Eddie Davis]

Blue, you are welcome, you have a very pleasant voice and as one of the other reviewers said, it is very hard to try to sing without music. You have a lot going for you, Blue, and an incredible amount of talent as well as being an extremely lovely and charming young lady.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I have something to confess, though. I have a poor self-esteem and that often gets in the way when I try to showcase my talent. This site has opened doors of opportunities for me and people like you are the ones who keep me going. Thank you. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Anyway, are you into graphic arts? I saw the pictures in your chapters and they're cool. :)

[Eddie Davis]

Blue, sometimes the poor self-esteem is what gives a person their charm. What I mean is that it keeps someone from being all arrogant and 'puffed-up'. You come across as a very charming, sweet young lady and even your poetry reflects that. Believe me, as popular as your poetry is, and from reading the comments on your work, you are extremely talented and are a diamond in the rough, just waiting to be discovered. To answer your second question, yes I am into graphic art, I use a CAD rendering program called DAZ Studio Pro to create and render the images for the chapters in my books. It takes a lot of time, though, so I don't get a chance to render a picture for each chapter, but I try. Many times the images I create are really quickly put together, and as a result, don't look as professional as I would like if I had more time to work on them. My goal is to illustrate through 3D rendering, each chapter of all my books and poems.

[Veeran Black]

Powerful. I love your voice.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Aaron. :)

[Cassie]

You we're also a good singer! The lyrics was totally awesome! I just wanted to say that I'm also a filipino. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow, nice to meet you, Cassie! :) And thank you for your kind review. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

I catchd a beat...it's awesome !

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

That's impressive, then. Thank you, Glitch. :)

[Raymond Federle]

To cool! The lyrics are great. Hope you post more! Good work.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Raymond. :)