No More (Song with Video)

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.

You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.

You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say

*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.

I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...

(Repeat Chorus)

Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...

But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

Author's Note

What do you think of the song? And does anybody know the guitar chords of this? I'd really like this to have a background music.

One more thing, I apologize for the video. Obviously, there was a mistake while I was filming it. Haha. Thank you.

Reviews

[Inda]

Love it, specially the ending, a great twist that is full of honesty and feelings!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Inda. :)

[Brooke Graco]

As soon as I read the lyrics, I thought it could be sung by Avril well, then you sung it and then Taylor Swift came to mind. Nice country rhythm, would go well with acoustic guitar. Nice job.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you for your kind review and for mentioning Avril and Taylor. They are two of my favorites, actually. :

[Brooke Graco]

Mine too :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Love these lyrics, Blue - broken promises lead to broken hearts... I applaud your singing as well - I know nothing of chords, but I think this would be great with guitar accompaniment. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Rita. :)

[Dayran]

We sometimes punish ourselves ... on account of love ... to make us more worthy of the variety of ways that it seeks to love. And sometimes ... it loves ... without knowing that it does. Nice.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Lovely thoughts, Dayran. Thank you. :)

[gabrielle]

Hi, Blue. You are a multi-talented person with amazing sweet voice. I truly want to hear this song with instrument (piano or guitar would be great). i am not really into music but i noticed that the melodies/rhythm are almost the same. The message is beautiful. However, in my opinion if this song will be released commercially, there's possibility that listeners may lose interest because of the lack of variation in the melodies. considering the content of the poem, i feel that "edgy rhythm" would best fit it especially the following lines:

"Did you
expect me
to save our love before it ends?
That night
when you
said we're better off as friends?
Now why
are you
suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.
Are you
now tired
playing games with your exes?"

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Gabrielle! Thank you for noticing the commercial aspect which I have obviously overlooked. I agree that my song somehow lacks variation but I don't feel like revising it. Haha. Again, thanks a lot! :)

[gabrielle]

hey, blue! It's ok. Opinions vary due to differences in preference. The most important thing is that you are fully satisfied with your work. keep on composing! =)

[Mark]

I like the words and the melody. The chickens added a nice touch LOL, just kidding. There was a time when I would've been able to help you with the chords, but I haven't played in 20 years. Need to go find myself a guitar.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I tried to learn how to play guitar but for some reasons I couldn't just have it right. That's why I admire those who can play it very well. Thank you, Mark, for your kind comment. And best wishes with your guitar. ;)

[annabellee]

what a cool song :)
thanks for sharing this with us.
keep it up :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Annabellee. :)

[annabellee]

you are most welcome :)

[Laura Harrison]

You have a lovely singing voice :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much. :)

[costa siwale]

Exceptional piece of writing .. Well done

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Costa. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Very, very nice, Blue. I think this would work really well as a country song.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I think so, too. I was influenced by Taylor Swift who happens to be a country singer. Thank you so much, Pryde. :)