No More (Song with Video)

No More (Song with Video)

A Poem by Azure Montessa (Blue)
"

I love you no more.

"

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.


You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.


You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say


*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)


Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.


I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...


(Repeat Chorus)


Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...


But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

© 2013 Azure Montessa (Blue)


Author's Note

Azure Montessa (Blue)
What do you think of the song? And does anybody know the guitar chords of this? I'd really like this to have a background music.

One more thing, I apologize for the video. Obviously, there was a mistake while I was filming it. Haha. Thank you.


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This is beautiful :) and I adore your cute voice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you. A lot. :)
I really did love the lyrics , it's so meaningful and true as well as the video it's so amazing in a funny and good way , well girl girl ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

I am pleased you find the video funny. Credits to the rooster. :) Thank you so much for your beautif.. read more
This was so nice and lovely as a song and a poem. You have a good voice too...Thank you for sharing...:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome,...:)...........
Wow . A lot of effort you have put on the whole thing. Kudos ! Sweet video from you indeed !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Anand. :)
I enjoyed this...I can actually hear some heavy power chords to this, not acoustic...it needs heaviness to the chords to accompany the powerful lyrics...awesome! Your voice would suit the power driven guitar...maybe a nice twelve string too x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Ruth! I admire your knowledge on things like this. I actually thought acoustic would be best.. read more
Ruth

10 Years Ago

Welcome love...but you make the song as you hear it lol I am in a band, so do many genres of style b.. read more
This is beautiful i rely loved it.Well written....it's something i will love to learn.would you teach me sometime?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Hi, Talkless! Thank you for your lovely words. What would you like to learn? Songwriting?
To write is one thing but then to sing...well that's just an amazing accomplishment. Well done with this. The raw emotion and feeling in this was projected well.

Very well done Blue.

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Troy. :)
You have a nice voice. I like the ending of your poem, it adds another dynamic to it that is very welcomed and a bit unexpected, it shades the poem in a different way than I had first seen it. Nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Rocans! :)
Amazing and produced powerful feelings from me as many will be able to relate to this. Love it! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Blue you did amazing and you may not be a singer, but you have a lovely voice. I have a friend that writes background music and hes actually working on my song, Elle's Lullaby. He does an amazing job. If you want his contact info, inbox me sometime. Amazing job! xo Winter

Posted 10 Years Ago


Azure Montessa (Blue)

10 Years Ago

Hi, Winter! Thanks a lot for your kind words, especially for offering your friend's help. I would lo.. read more
FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

I will definitely ask him for you when I see him ^^

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Added on November 30, 2013
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