I Plead My Case

A sinner's plea...

 

 

At the cross I plead my case

To You who willingly took my place

Heaven bids me now confess

The beast in me I now profess

And here I kneel before the throne

with sins I've done, secrets now known

all laid out for the Judge to see

Your verdict now awaiting me.

 

At the cross I plead my case

Fearing for my Master's face

I grieve for all the chances lost

Ignorance of a pleasure's cost

Excuses, reasons now prove so lame

Earthly glories fading to shame

Truth withheld and white lies told

Loving the bliss of Satan's hold.

 

At the cross I plead my case

Begging for a drop of grace

Sinful life I have renounced

Your endless love to be announced

Proclaim me guilty for justice's sake

Torment of hell I now shall take

But like to the thief before he died

Remember me where you reside.

 

Author's Note

I have shown my sentimental, sensual, and suicidal side. Here's a glimpse on the spiritual. :)

Anyway, I have nearly 350 RRs so I have to finish those before accepting RRs again. To be fair, I won't send my RRs in the meantime. This poem will be the last for now.

School break is over so I might not be as active in this site as before. Best wishes to all!! :)

Reviews

[Tom]

Deeply soulful & spiritual, a poem penned with creative contrition !

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Tom, you made me smile with your "creative contrition". Hmmm... That made me think. ;)

Thank you. :)

[ASPAR (A Sol Poet Arnay..]

Interesting work & you held my attention, nice use of words many a reader can feel this work..
Thank you & well done :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

You are nice and generous in compliments. As always. :) Thank you...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is amazing, i thought i was a good writer but ill never top this haha.
Your rhyming was amazing, the whole storyline was amazing.
It sounded extremely poetic, and it all went together really well.
I LOVED THIS PEACE!
Your truly such a talented poet this is one of the best poems i have read on this sight.
Job very well done.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Cimmy, your words are heartwarming. I don't regard my poems as highly as others do but yeah, thank you for letting me know my poems are worth sharing. :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome Hun anytime, they defiantly are and i enjoy reading them :)

[EmaleighLynn]

I love this poem! I am a Christian, and I know how it feels to "plead your case" before God. I love this! It really shows how it feels. Good job!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Ema, thank you for this. :)

[Kate H]

This is amazingly touching! I like it very, very much! Thx for the suggestion!! :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Kate, I thank you. :)

[Cassie]

Wow!!!!!!! this is such a powerful piece, I do not know how to review it but just know it did move me and this should be our daily prayer because day in day out, we sin but good thing he is merciful and always forgives us. Girl this is deep, I loved it and now am gon shelve it.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Cassie, you rock! :) I'm glad I am able to move your heart. That means I've used the talent that God has given me. :)

[Bowers]

Love it! This was such a great visual piece, a great piece giving the image of our judgement day, nice work!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Becky, thanks a lot! :)

[costa siwale]

beautiful..absolutely beautiful

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Now that's a short review that says so much! :) Thank you. :)

[David Burke]

I love your work and I would love the chance to get to know you :) a deep person like you would most likely bring a lot of inspiration message me any time

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahaha, thank you, Ryan! :)

[David Burke]

Your welcome :)

[Tam Warink]

Well, this is certainly a good way to close the chapter. Nicely done, Blue.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haha, it's as if you're saying this is the end, Tam. :) Anyway, I'll miss your reviews.