Here's to Me

a suicidal song

 

Here's to the boys I never kissed

To all my exes I never missed

Here's to my friends on the internet

To my own darling whom I never met

Here's to the gown I'll never wear

To all the children I will never bear

Here's to my mother and her pity shares

To my old dad who never really cares

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

 

Here's to the tears I haven't shed

To all my thoughts I have left unsaid

Here's to the joy I never knew

To all the promises I'll never do

Here's to the candles I'll never blow

To hopeful dawn that will never show

Here's to the faith I now forsake

To the fruits of this one mistake

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Author's Note

Avril Lavigne will be perfect for this song. :)

Reviews

[poetdoug]

Congrads on the tedious rhyme scheme. Difficult to do, but so Well Done.
You have a God given gift for words. Thanks for using it.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow. I am honored. Thank you so much! :)

[poetdoug]

You are most welcome

[Jack...]

There is so much going on in this wonderful piece and all of it is exciting and insightful. Blue my friend...here's to you, cheers to you. Amazing work here and indeed, this would be perfect for Avril.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Jack, cheers to you, too! Thank you so much! :)

[lovergirl]

lovely poems , it has a lot of bold well done ;)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Lovergirl. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Life can be so tough and dramatic. Some fall and some will keep fighting the good fight...A splendid sardonic poem....Bravo

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks as alwys, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Vani Jalagar]

This explains a strong essence:) loved it.......thank you for sharing:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Vani! :)

[Brooke Graco]

powerful. Every sentence just jumps out to me. Nice writing technique. :) love your work.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Brooke! :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like idea, it is really clever and you have carried the whole poem through brilliantly.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Glad you think so, Sheema! :)

[Rose of many colours]

You Know Blue This piece is shocking. I realy have to be honest with you...It speaks of suicide.It declares death, and the poem declares sincerity..You acknowledge past ,present and future This is a contemplation of a lot of teenagers under pressure especially with girls. God Bless you and may you be a blessing with your talent to me and others in the years to come ...

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

You blew me away with this accurate interpretation. And you have revealed some insights I had refused to admit. Brilliant! Thank you, Moonera. :)

[Rose of many colours]

God bless blue.. Keep up the great work..

[SyberRose]

Sounds like great lyrics to a song..nicely dark...Enjoyed as always Blue...Rose

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Rose! :)

[Sarah Lynn]

I loved this one ! In the beginning it sounded super rebellious like a good girl that was like ' f**k this s**t ' threw away all her dresses and became a bad girl! lol Very powerful poem . ! Nice work !

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Sarah, you totally got the picture! :) Thank you...

[Sarah Lynn]

You're very welcome !! (: