Here's to Me

a suicidal song

 

Here's to the boys I never kissed

To all my exes I never missed

Here's to my friends on the internet

To my own darling whom I never met

Here's to the gown I'll never wear

To all the children I will never bear

Here's to my mother and her pity shares

To my old dad who never really cares

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

 

Here's to the tears I haven't shed

To all my thoughts I have left unsaid

Here's to the joy I never knew

To all the promises I'll never do

Here's to the candles I'll never blow

To hopeful dawn that will never show

Here's to the faith I now forsake

To the fruits of this one mistake

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Author's Note

Avril Lavigne will be perfect for this song. :)

Reviews

[Child of God]

That was very good, I loved the flow and the rhyme very awesome

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Ryan! :)

[Child of God]

You're welcome hun :P

[Calibaster]

This is really sad! But i guess it's kinda true, some people do that. :/ Sad.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Some people simply don't know what they're missing out in life. :) Thank you!

[Calibaster]

You're welcome!

[Sue]

or Alana Morrissette for my generation :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I don't know her though. Haha. Thank you, Sue. :)

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Very well penned and performed, Blue !

Which Avril Lavigne song would you like ? I'll get you the code and link to add that in here.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Any depressing song that she has. She's always good at that. :) Thank you! :)

[dw817]

The most depressing song that makes me cry is, "Faith, Trust, and Pixie Dust." and you can stream it in here.
http://bit.ly/19SXaS2

As for Avril Lavigne, I don't know if you can stream it in here. They have it mega-protected, checked multiple versions.
http://bit.ly/4HUQha

[Prritiy]

the composition is nice
but
I didn't like the feelings in it, really, this is a composition which will hurt all those who love the person who has these feelings.
i wish everyone helps the person who is suicidal for what he/she leaves behind is many hurt hearts.

best wishes

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I don't like the feelings, too. When I was writing this, I was like, "My goodness! What am I writing? I am not even suicidal!" Haha. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :)

[Prritiy]

nice to hear that, that you just... only wrote it :)

[isus]

i fu****g like it, not bad at all!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Isus! :)

[Diana]

"Here's to the boys I never kissed." Bittersweet longing from the first line...

This would make an excellent song.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Many thanks, Diana. :)

[Frieda P]

You're giving Eminem a run for his money here plus you're way cuter. ;-) Shockingly delicious, I ate this one up!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Frieda, you really know how to crack me up! :D Thank you for your hilarious and excelent comments. :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

wonderful. BLUE...Just perfect...A SONG in the making...I do not keep many, but this will be in my FAVES....I LOVED it

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Doc... You rock! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

and roll..........Thanks

[Avinash]

Strong words, boiling emotions and perfect rhythm.. Applause .

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Avinash! :)