Here's to Me

a suicidal song

 

Here's to the boys I never kissed

To all my exes I never missed

Here's to my friends on the internet

To my own darling whom I never met

Here's to the gown I'll never wear

To all the children I will never bear

Here's to my mother and her pity shares

To my old dad who never really cares

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

 

Here's to the tears I haven't shed

To all my thoughts I have left unsaid

Here's to the joy I never knew

To all the promises I'll never do

Here's to the candles I'll never blow

To hopeful dawn that will never show

Here's to the faith I now forsake

To the fruits of this one mistake

 

Here's my shot at life

Box of pills and a kitchen knife

Here's to the girl that was never me

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Here's my shot at life

A stolen gun and a kitchen knife

Here's to the heaven I will never see

Oh, here's to me. Cheers to me!

Author's Note

Avril Lavigne will be perfect for this song. :)

Reviews

[Prime]

Yep, Avril Lavigne will be perfect for this song. It's really HER ! And oh, I like the suicidal "feel" of this piece. =D

[Blue]

Thank you, Prime!

[Mike Emil]

knives and pills
not a good combination
saki and plumb wine
much better
stop the suicide
if you are dead
you can't do anything but standup
in kohlrabi theater
literally!!!
HAI!!!

[Blue]

Thank you, Mike!

[Donald]

Expression in any form is one of the cures for the blues. I wrote a silly poem once. Maybe we can form a group of songwriters. With the right connections, anything is possible.

[Blue]

Thank you, Donald!

[Raymond Federle]

This is very, very cool. I like it, bunches. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Raymond.

[Laminators Dubai]

oh oh oh that was awesome!...you just ripped it.

[Blue]

Thank you!

[ASPAR (A Sol Poet Arnay..]

Yea I recall these thoughts as a teen, wondering & then of course the thoughts of loss & death..
cool I rather liked this too... :)

[Blue]

Thank you!

[Douglas White]

Either her or Marylin Manson. Interesting idea either way. Good lyrics, though.

[Blue]

Thank you!

[Nia Hope]

Interesting poem, it's dark but has an almost upbeat flow to it. Great job :)

[Blue]

Thank you!

[Poe Redd]

Bouncing in my seat and clapping- that means I like it, though I suppose my reaction isn't exactly appropriate, haha. The repeated stanza sits well in there too. Would make a great song, you're right; I can hear it.

[Blue]

Thank you!

[L4rn13]

Stunnig write as it has the element of surprise. Very dark but straight to the point. Love it!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you! :)