You

You are a monster,

tailored perfectly for me.

You exist solely for my destruction.

You torment me with your lies

and distorted philosophies.

You feed me with your thoughts.

You poison me with your curses,

polluting my mind with your shade of evil.

 

You are my ultimate definition of hell

and you hold me captive in your abyss.

You refuse to free me from your grasp

for I am your favorite prisoner.

You delight in my vulnerability,

my faint resolutions,

my vain attempts to escape.

 

You applaud my falls,

taking every error

as a chance to condemn me.

You laugh at my virtues

and you question my beliefs.

You take pleasure in my cries of agony;

my screams are music to your ears.

 

You wipe away every memory of bliss,

draining me of life,

emptying me of myself.

You strip me off of my heart

in your desire to make me be like you.

You are my monster, my enemy.

I am you and you are me.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading! :)

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

very clever...It sometimes aint wise to self analyse.......I honestly think this is your best to date....You know what it's like when you read something on here and wish deep down that you had been the author...Well I sure wish that I'd written THIS

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

That's so sweet of you to say, Wood. Still, I can never equal your poems. Thank you for this humbling review. Well-appreciated. :)

[Will Neill]

Blue, We all have to deal with our own monsters, good write-very dark.
Will

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks, Will. Glad you liked it. :)

[Frieda P]

Holy cats this is good Blue...I knew where you were going, you slapped me upside the head and flipped me over with this one...bat shyte crazy good! :-) That means I really liked it.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow, your review swept me away, Frieda. This is the first time you reviewed my poem in this manner. I mean, calling cats holy. Haha. ;) I'm touched beyond description...

[Frieda P]

Haha sometimes I get carried away when something blows my mind.... ;-)

[Jack...]

It is amazing sometimes who we really are. Blue, my friend, you atre very talented. This piece, though extremely dark held on to me till the end. You do dark very well.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

It's been a long time since I last written a humorous poem, Jack. :) Glad you liked this. :)

[SyberRose]

yes sometimes we are our own worst enemy..enjoyed the theme and nicely penned as always Blue...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks again, Rose. :)