To William
A Poem by
Azure Montessa (Blue)
A message to a lover.
Please tell him I will miss him
When fate bids us apart
For though we love each other
Ours is a hopeless art.
The time with him I spent
Is best of all the best
A "then" worth looking back
As bird longs for its nest.
This poem will cause him heartache
But dread not the goodbyes
I'm sure we're soulmates somewhere
Where our forever lies...
© 2013 Azure Montessa (Blue)
Author's Note
I challenged myself to write a poem in less than 10 minutes. This is what I've come up with.
P.S. William, I hope you get the chance to read this. :)
Reviews
Soulmates last the distance. Love this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ohh, you sound inspired, Elliot! Happy birthday! :x
Wow. So sad an thought provoking. Love is hard to leave in any situation and I feel like you really captured the truth in a situation like this. Well done it's a very pleasurable read :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow. So sad an thought provoking. Love is hard to leave in any situation and I feel like you really captured the truth in a situation like this. Well done it's a very pleasurable read :)
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Anna. Your reviews are encouraging. :x
A lovely poem! Sad, but beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A lovely poem! Sad, but beautiful.
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Susan. That short review of yours means a lot to me. :x
I hope William gets to read this too - it's beautiful :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I hope William gets to read this too - it's beautiful :)
11 Years Ago
Same here. Thanks, Sue. Glad you liked! :x
this is beautiful and written in under ten minutes, wow, you are good!! :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
this is beautiful and written in under ten minutes, wow, you are good!! :D
11 Years Ago
Heather, thank you for reading my humble works and for giving me reviews! :x
11 Years Ago
No problem as always it is my pleasure!! :D
Very beautiful Blue! When William
reads it, i know it will bring tears to his eyes :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very beautiful Blue! When William
reads it, i know it will bring tears to his eyes :)
11 Years Ago
Haha, that is most likely. Thanks, Mike! :x
You could've fooled me, you really did this in ten minutes? It's a great little love poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
You could've fooled me, you really did this in ten minutes? It's a great little love poem.
11 Years Ago
Mike, such an accusation! Lol. Thanks. :x
I loved this...and a great challenge too...I wish I could write one in ten minutes...fate always has the last word...Rose:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I loved this...and a great challenge too...I wish I could write one in ten minutes...fate always has the last word...Rose:)
11 Years Ago
SyberRose, of course you can. You are a better writer than I am and I know you are up for the job.. .. read more SyberRose, of course you can. You are a better writer than I am and I know you are up for the job.. Thanks again! :x
You have done well with your 10 minute challenge and I'm sure william will get the message. Your friend in words, Pete
Posted 11 Years Ago
You have done well with your 10 minute challenge and I'm sure william will get the message. Your friend in words, Pete
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Pete! :x
Woe is William, under ten minutes, good job Blue!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Woe is William, under ten minutes, good job Blue!
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Frieda!
11 Years Ago
Most welcome, let us know what Willy thinks of this one. ;-)
11 Years Ago
I'll keep you posted. :)
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