No More (Song)

It's about a girl who tries to move on from her ex-lover although she loves him still. (This is actually supposed to be a song.)

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.

You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.

You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say

*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.

I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...

(Repeat Chorus)

Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...

But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

Your writing is amazing and for some odd reason, I felt like you were singing this in Tagalog instead of English. It's as if it was really translated for it or was it fully in English in the first place. If so this is really amazing, I could see it being sang in acoustic and perhaps maybe R&B or pop.

So much depth and amazing piece, towards the end makes it fade away for sure. Great piece and I loved it. The message definitely is set in stone and written completely emotional! Nakakaiyak heh :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hi! Salamat sa comment mo. :) I didn't translate this from Tagalog to English. Anyway, I'm glad to see a fellow Filipino here in this site. Take care. :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Hi :) Walang anuman! Ah well it sounds so beautiful anyways and for surely emotional. I speak it fluently. Hope you have a great start to your day over there :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I pray the same thing to you. :)

[Douglas White]

Well done. This would make a good pop song, I think. I suggest maybe trying to publish this through songwriter sources and see how you make out with it. There are a lot of songwriters who simply write lyrics without music, although it does help having a basic music foundation behind the lyrics. That could be done with a cheap keyboard and a few chords to get the -idea- across. (Most pop songs are developed from just a basic idea and lyrics.) It's a thought, and it's certainly doable.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Too bad I don't know anyone who can make this into a pop song with music. I'm hoping my lyrics can reach Taylor Swift. I'm a big fan of hers and most of my written lyrics (they're not here) were inspired by her. Thanks for your comment! :)

[KurKota]

Very nice ! Since I am not a musician I really cannot comment about it technically.....but the words and thoughts seem heartfelt.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

This is the outpouring of my sentiments to an ex-lover. Sure, this is heartfelt. Thank you so much, Kurkota. :)

[Me]

Brilliant hun...would love to hear it with music :) x

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Raven! I would love to hear this with music, too. :)