No More (Song)

It's about a girl who tries to move on from her ex-lover although she loves him still. (This is actually supposed to be a song.)

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.

You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.

You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say

*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.

I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...

(Repeat Chorus)

Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...

But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

Your writing is amazing and for some odd reason, I felt like you were singing this in Tagalog instead of English. It's as if it was really translated for it or was it fully in English in the first place. If so this is really amazing, I could see it being sang in acoustic and perhaps maybe R&B or pop.

So much depth and amazing piece, towards the end makes it fade away for sure. Great piece and I loved it. The message definitely is set in stone and written completely emotional! Nakakaiyak heh :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hi! Salamat sa comment mo. :) I didn't translate this from Tagalog to English. Anyway, I'm glad to see a fellow Filipino here in this site. Take care. :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Hi :) Walang anuman! Ah well it sounds so beautiful anyways and for surely emotional. I speak it fluently. Hope you have a great start to your day over there :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I pray the same thing to you. :)

[Luke L]

Very dark I feel the emotion in this I'd like to hear how you intend this to be sung actually

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I need someone to sing this for me. My voice would have ruined the content, otherwise. ;) Glad you liked this, Luke! :)

[Eddie Davis]

Wow, not bad! To me it sounds like an American 'Country' song, by one of the newer, younger country singers. I bet it you could find one that would snatch it up quickly. The way the words flow, you can almost hear the melody.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'm influenced by Taylor Swift who started out as a country singer. Thanks a lot for this, Eddie! ;)

[Dhaye]

Wow! A lyrical piece. I like to hear the notes because this is really excellent when it comes to the structure and word choice. So moving concept. There are many of us here with our own compositions published here. I'm proud of you, too, Kabayan. I'm really glad we meet today, and I'm so excited with the talents I have to watch out here (from you). LOL.

Actually, I have my own compositions posted here. Some were posted with music video I have made for the piece. I also play the keyboard myself...but sad to say I'm not that really good in playing it. I only know the basics. I dreamed to play an acoustic guitar but it's difficult with my hard fingers. LOL.

By the way, the pic you used here is so familiar because I also used it in one of my works, too. Hehe. We have the same choice, I suppose.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'm glad our paths crossed, too! Your poems are brilliant and I would love to watch out for your latest writings. I don't usually visit the profile of other writers so I don't get to read most of what they wrote. Please keep me updated of your poems by sending me RRs. :)

Hahaha. At least you know the basics! I've tried to play guitar and keyboard but it's too hard I gave up. So I play with my pen instead. ;) They say "Play according to your strengths."

Lols, the last paragraph is a surprise. I didn't know that. Haha. I like the picture. If I were to come back to earth as an animal, I would love to be a blue butterfly. That's why this is my avatar. ;)

Thanks for the reviews, especially for the compliments! Glad of this new friendship. :x

[Dhaye]

Wow! If you will notice, I also love butterflies because it's so memorable to my sister...and to me, too...because sisters have the same choices most of the time. Haha.
I'm not sending RR's anymore. I closed my own RR because some are over-requesting without giving back the favor. LOL. So, I only read those works of writers who visit my page, and when I like the writer, I am just reading his work because I like it, without expecting a return. But I assure you, I like your style,not because you are my Kabayan but because I find another brilliant writer here.
God bless!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haha, same here. (Maybe we're sisters? lol) I'll visit your profile every now and then. :x

[Michael G. Smith]

Awesome!! I can hear it. As I am reading I'm listening to David Essex's Rock on.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haven't heard of him, though. :) Thank you so much. ;)

[Michael G. Smith]

English actor, one-hit wonder.

[smilempsn]

..wOOw.. that definitely sounded like a song (just a bit big )..
I like it... ^-^

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks, Smile. ;)

[smilempsn]

:D you are most welcome B-)

[Pryde Foltz]

You've written a very good break up and come-back, no don't come back song here. I felt you.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much! :* It's really nice of you to compliment my writing. I had read your poems and they're excellent! You are really something. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

That is very kind and generous of you to say. Feel free to send me some RR's.

[Split Voices]

Nice song. Tried to singalong with it (love singing), and I could get a pretty good melody going. Would be interested in hearing how you think it should sound. As for the content, I like how it begins with trying to be rid of the person and pushing them away, but then regretting it at the end of the song. Have had many relationships feel like that, and I think it's unique to have the singer's opinion change mid-song like that. Great work!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much, Split Voices! I have a melody in mind but I'd like to hear yours. That's way interesting! ;)

[SuperChick62]

It's got a pretty good lyrical flow. It's a little cliche at time, but a lot of lyrics are. The important thing is that you say what you came here to say. You expressed yourself very clearly so everyone knew what you were talking about, and those that have dealt with this like you have and relate. Very "hit the road jack." Good write.

M. Super

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

A million thanks!

[Lydia Shutter]

These lyrics would be a wonderful hit since most people can relate to the topic. It's wonderful you are not taking him back even with the chocolates and the flowers....you know what you want and you are empowered. This is very good. Lydi**

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

It was a tough dilemma. I'm torn between letting go and moving on. Obviously, I chose the latter. Sometimes I feel regretful and I often wonder if our "relationship" would have been sweeter had I given him another chance. But now, I'm joyous cause I know I made the right decision. He wasn't what I wanted and needed, after all. Thank you so much! :*