Promise

It was two at the night

I took my pen and began to write

To the one whom I adore

From my deep and my core

Though I know you’re far

But I love you as you are

Just your glance makes me smile

And for that I travelled through miles

You’re the best thing ever happened to me

Always I find you wherever I see

You taught me how to love & to live

Everything will be small whatever I give

Just I want to promise this

You’ll be in my every wish

And I promise you again n again

We will share our every pain

Reviews

[Fairy Khan]

Comes straight from the heart. Nicely put

[Anjali]

Excellently written poem, expressing the best of what you promise to your lover.

[Kari Rakitan]

The devotion expressed here is very touching. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, gentle and wonderful words for love my friend.
"Just I want to promise this
You’ll be in my every wish
And I promise you again n again
We will share our every pain"
I liked the lines above. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote