Only For You

Dedicated to Someone Special..

Every gift seems small for this birthday girl,

Whether it is silver, gold or a shiny pearl.

But still wish to give her something,

Who wants to fly even without wings.

Everyone looks beautiful with a smiling face,

But her lovely smile...Nobody can replace,

And you know for that smile,

I wander through miles and miles.

She does everything with devotion,

So I bow my head towards her dedication.

I have seen a adorable girl inside,

And writing about her is just like a pride.

Her silvery voice flows like rills,

For me she resembles such as daffodils.

My affection for her will last forever,

Will it decrease?...say never and never.

Her smile is infectious just like flu,

Whenever she smiles, I start smiling too,

What I think and what's my view,

All I have written only for you.

Author's Note

After a long time... Tried to compose something.

Reviews

[Jess]

Beautiful piece highlighting feelings for someone important. Very bold and well done.

[Anjali]

Lovely words to compose this beautiful piece. The bold sentences meant for that someone special is noteworthy.

[Lacey Sue]

Girls should be treated like queens and have the door opened for them and be respected by the guys. The guys should be treated like kings and be respected by the chicks, but I'll say this it goes both ways because respect, honesty, and loyalty matter for everyone

[Lacey Sue]

This poem is extraordinary and I feel you shall make similar poems

[Pragati Chaudhary]

It's so beautiful. I wish somebody could have written it for me!

Thankyou!

[Vidit V Kumar]

Well Written mate. Appreciate your thoughts process as well as the flawless rhythm you've put in there.
Best wishes :)

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Wow, It really touches many hearts especially me. Every word speaks something that's Wonderful written and beautiful.i loved it. Don't stop writing keep your flow. Congrats for your upcoming poems I'll be waiting to read
Thank you

[Prakruti Singh]

i really appreciate the way you have expressed the feelings. the poem seems to be alive. the rhyme is impressive. but you need to work more so that you don't lack context of the poem. as every other review reads, its really heart touching. keep up the good work. :) :)

[Anjeline]

It's really very sweet. It has a easy flow but at the same time is heart touching

[Taniska 😊€..]

That girl is really lucky cause there is someone who really cares for her. Very touching poem . I love it . Keep writing (smiles ) 😊😊😊