Mai Nirbhaya Hu

Dedicated to all the women and a tribute to Nirbhaya....

 

 

16 december ki thy wo raat,

Jab koi nahi tha mere saath.

Kar rahi intazar sarak pe,

Jab mai kharii akeli thy,

Na maa-peeta the mere saath,

Na hi koi saheli thy.

Haa mai aakeli thy.

Haa mai aakeli thy..

Thori daari....saahmi thy mai,

Dil me ajab ghabrahat thy,

Na jaane kiska saaya tha,

Na jaane kiski aahat thy..

Aagey jo hua saath mere,

Usko kaise batati mai,

Sabd bhi mil jaatey agar,

Dard nahi baat paati mai.

Na jaan kya-kya kiya mere saath,

Na jaane kitna peeta phir,

Bal pakar maara tha usne,

Sou bar mujhe ghaseeta phir..

Mai chickhti.

Mai chelaati thy..

Har bar unhe samjhaati thy,

Lekin un darindoo ko meri bat,

Samajh nahi aati thy....

Un darindoo ne mujhe kheloyna bana,

Khel-khel kar aab toor diya,

Phir fek mujhe sarko pe,

Martaa aakela choor diya..

Chikh-chikh kar,

Ro-ro kar aab,

Aashoo bhi mujhse ruth gayi,

Maa-peeta ki pakri ungli,

Kuch pal me hi chut gayi...

Phir seeyasat rajneeti me mai,

Bas ek laas ban kar reh gayi,

Phir moti-moti kitaboo me,

Etihaas ban kar reh gayi.

Aaj bhul gaye sab mujhe,

Nahi hu yaad kisiko mai,

Chalo koi bat nahi,

Tumhe mai hi yaad dilaa deeti hu,

Aur ek bar phir mai tum sab ko,

Nirbhaya se mila deeti hu...

Haa mai nirbhaya hu,

Haa mai ek stri hu,

Mai dharm hu,

Mai karma hu,

Mai kaal hu,

Mai kaali hu,

Mai laxmi hu,

Mai paarvati,

Mai hi sherawali hu..

Mai hanshvaahini hu,

Mai hi gyandaayani hu..

Mai kaavaya hu,

Mai kalaa hu,

Mai etihaas ki gourav gaatha hu,

Mai hi Sindhu,

Mai hi Yamuna,

Mai hi Ganga maata hu...

Mai aant hu......suruaat hu,

Mai har pal tere saath hu.

Mai dawaa hu,

Mai duaa hu,

Ha mai nirbhaya hu..

Ha mai nirbhaya hu..

Kalam uthaa haathoo me mai,

Hathiyaar bana kar gaa rahi hu,

Is puri duniya ke purush se,

Ek chota prashan uthaa rahi hu,

Is dard se bara kya koi dard ho saktaa hai?

Jo naari ka apmaan kare,

Kya wo mard ho saktaa hai?

Kya wo mard ho saktaa hai?

Aab kuch nahi chahti hu,

Bas itna hi mangti hu,

Ki ek lau....ek mashal,

Tm aapne andaar jalne do,

Bahar bujh jaye hazaro mumbatiyaa,

Andar ki aag ko jaltey rehne do...

Bahar bujh jaye hazaro mumbatiyaa,

Andar ki aag ko jaltey rehne do...

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Reviews

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Kehta yeh pal...khudse nikal...jeete hai chal...jeete hai chal!
A man never hurts women...yess men never...coz the one who does is never a man....Actually he could never grab the opportunity to have the honour of being a man!!
This is like....how can a person stoop so low...it's the example....I wish they had knew that harassment can't be done only by men...when at actual it knows no gender...nonetheless they'll never mend their ways......

It's really powerful writing...thanks for sharing Anshu!

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much Tahsin...
And I absolutely agree with your words..

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Wc!😊.......!!

[Riddhi]

I really liked this poem and I am more happy because a boy wrote this...Aur pata nahi hamare is desh me aur kitni ladkiyo ko nirbhaya banana padhega..Na jaane kab khatam hoga ye silsila..Barso se chahe vo sita ho ya Draupadi , ek stri ko hi kyo sab kuch sehna padta hai...Aur aise bhi kaafi cases hai jaha par ab tak insaaf nahi mila hai..
I just hope that every boy and every man should start thinking like you , then this will never happen..A beautifully written poem.
Keep on writing..

[Anshuman Aryav]

Ameen...😇
Thanks for reading...

[Akki]

WOW... I really enjoyed it. You're really good writer and I'm really lucky to have you here as my friend. The most liked part of me was where you compare a pen as a weapon and you asked question.

It's really feeling helpless when we heard such news on TV because we never can do anything about it. It's painful to just sat down at couch and watched on TV. I never understood why some people don't think anything before they involved in such crimes.

There is a very famous lines - Men Will Men. But, I would like to say All Men Are NOT Same.
Anyway...
Thanks for sharing with us. It's really a good poem. Love it....Keep Writing.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Men Will Men. But, I would like to say All Men Are NOT Same..
I totally agree with you...
read moreMen Will Men. But, I would like to say All Men Are NOT Same..
I totally agree with you...
I just want to say...
Jab sajaa maut ki laagu hogi,
Sare dosi ladko par,
Tab Khun se latpat koi ladki,
Nahi milegi sadko par...

Thank you so much for this beautiful review....

[Swagatika Behera]

No he can't be called a man. He doesn't deserve to be called as a man.
Each word of your writing is so powerful that it can burn fire inside anyone
I really loved it
Waiting for your next writing

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thanks Swagatika...and I am glad that you loved it..

[Mary Christabel George]

It brings tears in eyes to read this.
I still cannot forget that night when the news kept flashing on screen & I kept wondering how her flesh bore such a terrible pain. You know my friend we have two sorts of demons in the society : one who does such heinous acts & second the ones who think that women are themselves responsible for such acts.
Its a kind of relief to read your work as it tells that there are normal ppl like us in the world still.. but we have got a long long way to reach to the status of a civilized society where we live & let live.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much for this lovely review.

[Anjali]

"Jo naari ka apmaan kare,
Kya wo mard ho saktaa hai?"
This is so true. You defined a true man. The whole piece is beautiful and so emotional.... It still hurts my heart to think that people who are like demons exist in this world. You've written this so beautifully! Excellent work! Keep writing.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much Anjali.....I am glad that you liked it..

[Anjali]

You're very welcome!

[NEHA]

But hey, why are you wasting your time penning the pain of a million women????!!!!!
I've developed a habit of saying this to all men who have stood up for women....since this is what I see around me...the society!!!!!!!!!
I'm glad to have a friend like you...a guy...rather A TRUE MAN.....
Most men with their big penises just go out there and claim to be protecting women but end up staring at cleavages !!!!!!!!!!
It's time we revolt against such hypocrites!!!!!!!!
You've done your part..I appreciate that!!!!!

[Anshuman Aryav]

Yeah I totally agree with you....We cannot change the mentality of these demons..
We can just change ourself....
People will forget this creation tomorrow ... time will destroy it. And one more Nirbhaya will die again in the hands of those demons...
Then the same candle-march will come out and there will be a ruckus ... and after a few days all will be quiet ....and this is the reality of our society..

[Anjali]

I am speechless. Yesterday it was Nirbhaya and today it is 8- year old Asifa. Though there are good people out in there, these demons still exists among us.

Your poem is a reminder to all of us to voice against the barbaric acts happening in India. Well-written and thank you for sharing this with us.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Yes, I have written this poem yesterday and today I received this painful news .. I was very sad to read this and what was the use of writing it .... people will forget this creation tomorrow ... time will destroy it. And one more Nirbhaya will die again in the hands of those demons...
Then the same candle-march will come out and there will be a ruckus ... and after a few days all will be quiet ....

[Najam Us Saher]

Apne mere aankhon mein aansu la diye... ap jaise log agar duniya walo ko aise kavitayein likh kar sunaye toh hi shayad unki insaaniyat jaagi rahegi. Apki fikar aur dard ye kavita mein dekh kar mujhe apki qabiliyat par yakin ho gaya ki future mein ap ek ache citizen banoge. Sirf itna hi nahi, apki kavita mein ek jazba hai ek dard hai wahi apko apki manzil tak le jayega.
Agar is duniya mein hazar log hai jo fikar dikhate hai aise hi hazar logo ko karoron jahil logo se ladna padhta hai.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Bahut bahut dhanyavad apka....but Maine kuch bara ni kiya hai..
Maine bas Apne dard ko hathiyaar Bana kar Gaya hai,
Us nirbhay Nirbhaya ke charno me aapna sish jhukaya hai...

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah...
Apko lagta hai apne kuch nahi kia magar yahi choti choti cheeze jaise kisi ki taklif samajna aaj ke zamane mein bohot hai....

[Sikandar Khan]

What Can I Say After Reading This? Just Can Say Fantastic But It Reminds Us One Of The Sad Incident What We Have Forgotten And This Type Of Incident Is Happening Daily A Times Over All World.....What Can I Say More You Have Write In that Style You Have Directly Connect Her Story Again With Our Heart And Makes Me Emotional For Sometime.......

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel the same, I am deeply moved.

[Anshuman Aryav]

thank you to both of you....while Writing this poem i have tried to felt the pain and have presented that pain in front of you...... I was glad that you liked it but I would be more happy when everyone will be inspired by the composition....

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.