I and You

Dedicated to all the teachers.....

 

If I am a body,

You’re my soul.

If I am a struggler,

You’re my goal.

If I am a heart,

You’re the heart beat.

And if I am a book,

You’re the sheet.

Without you I am zero,

But your presence makes me a hero.

You’re my everything,

Who taught me to fly,

Even without any wings.

You‘re my inspiration,

You’re my support.

You’re like umbrella,

You’re like raincoat.

You’re my life,

You’re my future.

Because I am your student,

You’re my teacher.

Because I am your student,

You’re my teacher.

 

 

Reviews

[Lacey Sue]

This is deep and also a cute poem and I feel like you should write more and more like this one

[Muskan]

Simple words with a deep meaning,👍 keep it up 🙂

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank You Muskan..

[¿]

This symbolises the pure bond you keep in between you and you teacher as well as we!!
All the beautiful words are each a tribute to him.....He must be really proud of you Anshu!😊
Live long☺

[Anshuman Aryav]

Maybe....maybe not.. Thanks for this lovely review..

[¿]

Not maybe...for sure I bet! Welcome😊

[Varsha]

“Who taught me to fly, even without wings”....idk y but love that

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much...
I am glad that you liked it..

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and words. I liked he positive feel to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

This is one of the best poems I’ve read that’s a tribute to some group of people. And no group deserves accolades more than teachers! Their jobs are difficult, they give so much of themselves with so little pay, & they don’t have the materials they need, so they buy from their own pockets, to keep their classrooms prepared. It’s horrible, what’s happening to teachers. In the USA, many groups of teachers have been protesting & they are successful – not only getting higher pay, but also a bigger investment in the kids, so that they don’t have a class of 40 with only 25 torn-up books to go around. It’s a disgrace, but the teachers are fighting for a better way & I’m so proud of them. Your poem includes a dozen different ways to compare teachers to all the best things in life. Good use of analogy thru-out, showing instead of telling, by creating good examples. Excellent job! (((HUGS)))Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful to have that affect on another and another having that affect on you that you have a deeper connection and trust leading to unity of two functioning as one- true love and partnership depends on two as one in all areas- sharing, caring, loving- without eachother the one part is missing- great words🌹

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you for your kind review...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[mou]

beautiful tribute to every teacher. yes we all have a huge debt to them forever
mou

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much dear...

[mou]

you're welcome

[Anjali]

i loved the ending and how you repeated those lines... very nice! keep writing!

[Anjali]

Excellent Poetry. Keep up writing more Anshuman you have a long way to go.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much dear....
I am glad that you liked it..