Intezaar

aaj kaun yaad rakhata hai kise,
main sabhee ko bhula diya sab ne bhula diya mujhe,
lekin chaah kar bhi nahi bhula pata hoon tujhe,
kyonki ek kamaal hota hai,
jab bhee rota hoon,
Har anshoon ki boondon par,
likha tera naam hota hai,
Aur mai janta hoon ki main jaha bhi rahoo,
Mere saath hamesha tera pyaar rahega,
Aur mar kar bhi khulee rahagengi meree aankhen,
kyonki in aankhon ko bhi tere aane ke intazaar rahega..

© 2018 Anshuman Aryav

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Shweta

Oh I love this..!
kya likha hai,
Jo likha hai.
Ek baar ja suna de use yeh,
Jiske baare me yeh likha hai
Kya pata woh tere paas aa jaye
Jiske Dil me uske liye yeh pyaar hai
Jo aakho se itna kuch bol gaya
Jo apne lekh me itna kuch likh gaya.

Beautiful write Anshuman Aryav

Posted 1 Year Ago

Khilengi jaha...bahare sabhi... mujhe tu waha.........payega!!
I know u remember the song....ur poem is buzzing in my mind with that!!
Specially when I got to read in hindi😊
Thanks for sharing with the lovely image!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you also for this beautiful review...

6 Years Ago

😊😊😊😊😊😊WC!!!

Anjali

Wow.... Beautiful! I really love one thing about your writings is that the rhyming scheme is perfection... Like I don't know how you do it, find the perfect word and put it in the right place... That's talent, and you certainly have it. Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anjali..

Pragati Chaudhary

Wah wah

Kaise kahen ki alfaaz nahi milte
Aap vo phool hain jo is chaman main baar baar nahi khilte :)

Lovely Written

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Omg... thank you Pragati for this amazing and unforgettable review...it means a lot..

Anjali

Excellent poem, it hit the bulls eye. Please consider spelling of this line:

"Aur mar kar bhi khulee rahagengi meree aankhen"

It should be:

"Aur mar kar bhi khulee rahegi meree aankhen"