I am time

I am time.

I am a game.

You all are players here,

And you all play with me,

You all follow a way with me.

It’s your decision to make that way,

Right or wrong.

It’s your decision to make yourself,

Weak or strong.

I am time.

I am a competition.

You all are competitors here,

And you all fight for your future,

You do everything for your bright future.

It’s your decision to make your future,

Dull or bright.

It’s your decision to make your life,

Dark or light.

But I am just like garbage for you all,

Because you waste me everyday,

But I am time and I will waste you one day.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Loved the personification and the message it conveys. Last line was very effective it shows the power what time can do.
Third line it should be players and you all are competitor here, should be competitors.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much and thank you also for the corrections...I will correct it..

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[pia]

i loved the concept and power you managed to emit from your words. it was all amazing.
just in a few places i felt the sentences were a little redundant or seemed a little disconnected. those sorta hinder the flow of the words in such a nice poem like this one. if you proof read it once or twice u can make it amazing

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much for your suggestions...I am agree with you...
I will absolutely correct it...
And our mistakes are the proof that we are trying...