Sabdo Ko Jora Maine

A Hindi poem

Wo bhi kya raate thy,

Jab muskurane ka karan,

Choti choti batein thy.

Uhi kabhi hasta mai,

Uhi kabhi roota.

Maa ke goad me,

Jab bhi sar rakh soota,

Lagta tha ki hoon mai jaynat me,

Baas mera hi naam hota,

Mere pita ke maynat me.

Aab aa gayi thy inke sapno ki baari,

Laga tha mai karne tayari,

Tha mai aab khoz me jivaan ke,

Le aayi meri zindagi mujhe,

Saamne ek darpan ke,

Dekhne laaga mai jab ussme,

Pata chala kya kya kaami hai mujhme.

Phir kuch karne ka maan bana liya,

Andar ki baato ko andar dabba liya.

Aab maine ek kaalam utha liya,

Aur sabdo ko jora maine,

Kavita bana diya.....

Baas uhi chalta raha mai,

Bahout se kaaten aaye mere rasto me,

Kabhi mai geerta,

Kabhi mai uthta,

Har baar mai uhi sambhalta.

Bhavnaoo ko jorne ka aadat bana liya,

Sabdo ko jora maine,

Iizaat kama liya....

                                                       Anshuman

Reviews

[Sakshi]

Inspirational one.. Gd.. Keep going..

[Anshuman Aryav]

thanks Sakshi..

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Its like a blessing

Really sweet :)
Keep up the good work

:)

[Anshuman Aryav]

thank you so much dear..

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Always

:)

[Anjali]

Wow...... It's beautiful. I really really liked it! This is going in my favorite list for sure!

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thanks Anjali...I am glad you like it...

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[Najam Us Saher]

I like your thoughts. The spellings were a bit different which created difficulty in reading. That's it apart from it, it was nicely written. ☺

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[writ rajat]

work on spellings like roota soota thy

[Anshuman Aryav]

okay i will make it correct.

[Anshuman Aryav]

please give your suggestion if you think it can be more beautiful creation.