Closure

 

Things unkown, things unspoken
weighing on my mind again
will they ever come to fruition?

You left me here, no rhyme or reason
left in torment--sick fascination
Abandoned.

What once was love, has now turned to hate-
hate of the unknown--hate of fate
Abandoned.

Why did you leave without even a word
I thought I meant more to you. This is absurd.
Abandoned.

Time heals all wounds, they say
For peace of mind is all I pray
Abandoned.

Time passes; rage and anguish fill my mind-
So much for the healing time.

Author's Note

This was written after months of frustration and desparation to forget. It represents the search for closure.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

When it's personal, like this one appears to be, I look to see if i can feel the emotion, passion, hurt...that they write about. You accomplished this. I also like that you didn't try to force a rhyme for rhymes sake. It's personal, it's real. You can't ask for much more. I like you kept a solid structure and good flow. I can't express this enough, poetry comes from inside. The more personal, the more I can see through your eyes the better for me. Don't be afraid to look outside the box and definately dont be afraid to cross lines. More importantly don't stop. Keep writing, there are no limits except your own. I like this, and now expect to see more.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well versed and intelligent, a somewhat fierce insight into the human mind and it's workings, well done!

kind of sad, have felt this way before

[EGabriellS]

This is really well done. I can feel the frustration here. It helps that I know the feeling. I liked reading it.

[Amanda Rena]

thank you everyone for your comments. I wrote this poem out of frustration. It was about someone who left my life 8 months ago, and no matter how much I try to put him out of my mind, I have my moments where I just break down. This poem exemplifies the frustration and confusion that I feel over the situation and the closure i seek, but cannot find.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I felt these exact emotions though over time they have softened...very well expressed...I truly enjoyed reading this! Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Fabric Pulse]

The reader feels everything you feel maybe more powerful here than in any other poem, the empathy it portrays is real and there and shining and felt.

[Shayla Sayer]

i loved it!

[Alexa Tasch]

this is so emotions and i can tell it's real. great flow of the words. I really really liked it!