A thosusand smiles

Tis Christmas eve, you ask what i got you

more than you could ask for i reply

a curious face

i smile

 

A thaousand smiles...

they would make u happy

 

A thousand smiles...

they would show you love

 

A thousand smiles...

they would send you comfort

 

A thousand smiles...

send a thousand prayers

 

Athousand smiles...

give you kisses

 

Athousand smiles...

have a million laughs

 

A thousand smiles...

is what you give

 

I have you and i cant ask for more

a thousand smiles is what your worth

 

 

TO MY TWIN HEIDI♥♥♥

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

First off, I read your profile, because I like to know a little about the author before I review anything, and I thought this was funny. " I am terrible at spelling. I love to meet new people. I have a mysapce and AIM" You spelled myspace wrong a sentence after you said you were bad at spelling, haha. I'm not poking fun, I just thought it was funny. So ANYWAY, about your poem. Sounds like a great/non-expensive present, I should totally do that for my mom next christmas! Haha, but being serious, this is a touching piece. I like the repitition you used with the "A thousand smiles..." I hope you had a fantastic christmas, and I hope she loved this poem. Thanks for sharing this good write.
-Bryce

[John Stussy]

Beautiful poem, great to see she enjoyed it as well. I kinda have to say I wish my brother and I had the guy version of thsi closeness, but the way we feel is the exact opposite of this poem. It's great to see this isn't how it's supposed to be, that we can improve how he and i relate to each other.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautiful, soothing write, bringing a wonderful sense of peace! Wonderful!!!

Craig

[Heidi]

thats ME shes talking bout!!!!! ^.^ feeling the loooooveeee!

[Roger Ferguson II]

awww ashley =') beautiful

[Yaooooooo]

? What you erroring about?
Good write keep it up and I'll check out the rest of your work latter...
ONe!

[angelmom1955]

This is my niece so I am a little predjudist I think. But I think shlees writings are terrific. Only people who know her would know this.

[Legion]

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Well it wasn't a thousand, but you get the picture. Love the love in this one. :)

[Brette Medb]

I liked this a lot... nice dedication.

Brette

[Mark]

This is really quite good! A unique and interesting poem, very well written and formatted perfectly. It's very simple on the surface, and says quite a bit with relatively few words...and thats important in poetry. Well done!