the heart

It's full of cray, sensless emotion

and all becomes unvaild in a single motion

It's every persons strongest keep

but also the flaw that makes them weak

 

Live brings life much laughter

but a deathly pain comes forth soon after

the happyness of being in the arms of someone

quickly get ripped away when two becomes one

 

This can go one for oh! so long

the heart learns to sing a darker song

it turns to ice, it sits and waits

for someone to heal it no matter how long it takes

 

Out of no where a person walks by

causing your heart to suddenly fly

you look in thier eyes and everythings right

the world becomes a lesser fright

 

that breathe you can't catch, not you thoughts either

in a single moment you seem to need neither

your haerts aren't alone, always together

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful expression, revealing the highs and lows of love, loss, and living in the human condition. It was good to read your work again, Shlee!

[Yaooooooo]

the haert learns to sing a darker song (you might want to fix haert and make it heart)
Then out of no wehre a person walks by (fix wehre with where)

I had to fix those two errors, it makes it easier for a person to read. Hey whats the reason for making some of the text smaller?
Overall not bad for your first poem..
One!

[Cody]

WOW... That Was Deep!!!

[Roger Ferguson II]

ash your a poet!! ^_^
you should write poem more offten

[SM Davis]

Still waiting for that breath I can't catch. This was lovely! Light and yet speaks volumes.