A Home In Your Heart

This was a tough concept for me to write on. But here it goes..

I found a home in the city of your heart,

A garden of roses, a fountain of splendor;

I found a place in the warmth of your dreams,

An abode beyond love's tender.

A gateway to the seventh heaven,

Within my reach;

Like the enchantment of a prayer,

None can preach.

Like the strum of a string,

The poignancy of a fall;

The magic of a miracle,

An eagle's squall.

When you were lost in the labyrinth,

I built a home where you never can;

And they sang to you all along,

A woman just became a better man.

It's you, love just came your way,

Come sit here in front of me;

While you wonder who owns your heart,

Let me stare at you for eternity.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Just came over to tell you I love your name. Now, I find out it's a pseudonym. Although--and I'm sure you've heard this before--your actual name sounds like the pseudonym.
Well, even though "Adelia Aligieri" is a phony, you did have the good taste to choose it--I guess that counts for something.
By the way, your poem is unbelievably lovely and staggeringly good--especially for a mere lass to have written.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

you captured the hurricane of love- set it into a drinkable bottle - dwelling in another's city - oh the union of two...with the delicate after-fragrance of a rose- crimson- fragile - strong

[Chris]

Strong and perceptive...

Chris

[Syed Ali]

Hey. Loved what you wrote. Keep it up :)

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Words of a beautiful flower that calm the monster within. It smoulders dead emotions replacing those with a blazing passion inside.

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romantic as they come...with a sprinkle of depth for the purists.. :)

[Ladysue]

absolutely stunning..beautifully done... love your images...especially the last two lines...lovely...

[An owl on the moon]

There is a depth in love that melts two into one.. and you've captured the colors and feel of that so beautifully... living within the city of another... What a vibrant, lush concept you bring to light!

[Abdul Aziz]

Good poem, not as good as your other poems, but there are enough good lines to make it a pleasant read. I think the stopgap rhythm isn't utilized to good effect. Maybe you can improve this.

[Bruno]

A mystic poem to me. Great job!

[White Ink]

simple and lovely, i like this!